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I'm begging for my dreams on fractured, bloody knees.
Praying without belief to a God with no relief.

I've given all my time, and I think I've lost my mind.

You think me a disgrace as you spit in my face,
Teasing me with hope and feeding me only soap.

But I can finely see, there's nothing left for me,
Someone will take my place, I'm the last in this race.
It's the number laughing at me.
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
This is a great piece Crystal. very well done.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
Thank you.
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DeusIX Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A Poem with rhyme. cute ;)
I can't write myself, too many typos and grammatical errors.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
Thank you, the only reason why I don't have an overwhelming amount of grammatical errors is because of spell check.
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