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Another useless morning dawns,
Another tiresome creature yawns.
Lost I am in the depth of thought,
People can't  see the battle I've fought.

My scars are hidden by a harden face,
No smile has been found, I have no grace.
I look upon the work I've done,
And find that it is helpful to all of none.

I hate the flesh I'm bound to,
The words I weave I do but rue.
Rueful and spiteful I wish to cry,
But no tears will help me on the inside.

Who will help me to live without pain?
Will anyone try to keep me sane?
Am I lost to the grave?
Here is something that I've made, please tell me your thoughts.
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WordOfChen Jan 25, 2013  Professional Writer
A little bit of jerk in your rhythm, but it's progressing very nicely. I am truly impressed, well done ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Felicia-Neko May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very relateable.. been through that for years..
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:iconaisuruthewolf1:
"Ye be feelin' alright, matey?" Aisuru asked. "Ye asked fer me thoughts, so me first thought be if ye be feelin' okay."
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:icondragon-demygod:
Yeah, for now I'm alright, but sometimes my depression gets quite strong. It helps to know that someone cares. Thank you.
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:iconaisuruthewolf1:
"If ye ever be needin' anythin', just let me know."
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:icondragon-demygod:
"Thank ye once again."
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DeeryDeerth May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such a beautiful poem! I adore and envy your skill!
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DeeryDeerth May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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