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Another useless morning dawns,
Another tiresome creature yawns.
Lost I am in the depth of thought,
People can't  see the battle I've fought.

My scars are hidden by a harden face,
No smile has been found, I have no grace.
I look upon the work I've done,
And find that it is helpful to all of none.

I hate the flesh I'm bound to,
The words I weave I do but rue.
Rueful and spiteful I wish to cry,
But no tears will help me on the inside.

Who will help me to live without pain?
Will anyone try to keep me sane?
Am I lost to the grave?
Here is something that I've made, please tell me your thoughts.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Professional Writer
A little bit of jerk in your rhythm, but it's progressing very nicely. I am truly impressed, well done ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very relateable.. been through that for years..
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Indeed.
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AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
"Ye be feelin' alright, matey?" Aisuru asked. "Ye asked fer me thoughts, so me first thought be if ye be feelin' okay."
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Yeah, for now I'm alright, but sometimes my depression gets quite strong. It helps to know that someone cares. Thank you.
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AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
"If ye ever be needin' anythin', just let me know."
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
"Thank ye once again."
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DeeryDeerth Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such a beautiful poem! I adore and envy your skill!
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Thank you.
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DeeryDeerth Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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:icondiluculi:
Diluculi Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to it, more than I'm comfort with to admit.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
Indeed, I really hoped I could show someone that even though life feels like it's worthless, there are still people out there who understand and wish to help.
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Diluculi Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
there are :) And I'm sure the person will realize it, too :)
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
Hopefully. ^-^
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Writer
Your words have hit home for me. I can relate to each word of this poem...daily. I am going to be sending you requests for this to be seen in my other groups, especially A Safe Haven.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
I'm glade you like it.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Writer
You are welcome.
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
This is a beautiful piece that could rival even Chen's, I think. It's absolutely amazing Crystal.

I'm always here if you need someone to talk to. Don't forget that. My friend always says that I'm her link to sanity. Don't you ever give yourself up to the grave, not as long as I can stand by your side and offer up some help. OK?
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
Thank you, I really appreciate it. You've already done quite a lot for me, I wish I knew how to repay you.
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:iconsutsuki-sensei:
Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
You don't have to repay me for anything. I'm just here to help. I love helping all my friends.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
Indeed.
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
You have no idea how closely I can relate this to my past. I literally used to think like this...everyday...for 12 years.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
I still do. I hoped I could show through it that I understand how depression works and I hope that I could help someone with it; and perhaps they could help me.
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
I did just that to be honest. Except I never expected it to be another guy, but I have no regrets. he is everything I have ever wanted in a partner...even if it took me 3 months to settle my feelings for him.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
I'm glade you found someone, I hope we all can fine someone as you have.
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
To think my bf told me he thought about breaking up with me today. And I really do hope everybody finds the one for them. I am lucky and I refuse to let him go without doing everything in my power to keep us together.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
If you don't mind my asking, why did he wish to break up with you? If you do mind please tell me, I do not wish to be disrespectful.
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
I took a joke in bad taste a little too far and it is not the first time i have done this. he made this painfully aware to me and i have promised to try to stop myself from doing such a thing again. I understand though i do it a little too often and not only with him. x.x it was just my way of coping before i met him.
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Ah, I see. Well we live and learn, and we do what we can.
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