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Torn apart and filled with lines,
Words unspoken are hatefully tried.
Burned at the bud,
Stop at the start.

Grievously misled from the beginning,
Broken and killed from the mere heeding.
Paper strewn across the floor,
  The only love they've ever boor.

Here sit's a man in anger,
Lost is he in pain.
He tried to hide in the beginning,
Now all he is, is insane.

He wrote these hateful lines,
And just as they, he lies.
Never right, never perfect,
Always lost, forever hidden.

why can't i right one good poem?
Never will the words fit.
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is an amazing poem, and its not your only. Don't lost hope!
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
I know, this was about a person who has writers block and is a bit depressed.
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:iconkailani-e:
Kailani-e Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^ Okay. Well keep it up
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sparky-the-gamer Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your write amazingly!!!!! Don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise!!!
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional Writer
You write more than one good poem. All your poems are good, raw, and real.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Thank you, it means a lot to me that you think that.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional Writer
You are welcome. I will always be supportive of You as a friend and as a writer.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
And I shall always do the same for you, even if it doesn't seem so sometimes.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you. That means a lot to me. Now I believe it is my turn to reply to our three way story. Let me get to it so we can all continue. ^^
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Indeed.
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