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I'm angry, I'm sad, I'm hopeless, are you glad!?!
I'm pitiful, and weak, I'm a selfish, spoiled freak.
Change yourself they say, if you don't like what you see,
It all starts with a thought, but not even that I can be.

When you tell me to work, why do I cry?
It's not because I'm lazy, it's because I hate me inside.
Gather the whips, gather the fire, string me to a pole, and hit me till I expire.

I am filled with self hate, and yet they can't see,
how close this razorblade is, and how my wrist will soon bleed.
How easy it would be, to let it all go astray, to finish my work, and work me away.

Kill me now, I beg you please,
kill me before I turn into that monster begging on it's knees.



Oh, is that a mirror?
Just some depressing thoughts.
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:icongeorge551:
Very well written..you should be proud of this, final line is definately something I will remember.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Thank you very much, I really enjoyed writing it.
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TheAmericanRealist Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Amazingly written poem, as always Violet. I do have to say that that this one touched the heart strings... We do love you, you know. *Glomps*
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:icontheamericanrealist:
TheAmericanRealist Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe like it or not, you are stuck with us! (Me especially)^^
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:icondragon-demygod:
Indeed, so I might as well like it.
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:icontheamericanrealist:
TheAmericanRealist Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
Exactly!
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:iconqueenlilly18:
We all love you. Everyone from our lunch table. <3 <3
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:icondragon-demygod:
I know. Here is just a tip, all of my poetry will be depressing, but I will never commit suicide, so you need not worry.
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