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I'm angry, I'm sad, I'm hopeless, are you glad!?!
I'm pitiful, and weak, I'm a selfish, spoiled freak.
Change yourself they say, if you don't like what you see,
It all starts with a thought, but not even that I can be.

When you tell me to work, why do I cry?
It's not because I'm lazy, it's because I hate me inside.
Gather the whips, gather the fire, string me to a pole, and hit me till I expire.

I am filled with self hate, and yet they can't see,
how close this razorblade is, and how my wrist will soon bleed.
How easy it would be, to let it all go astray, to finish my work, and work me away.

Kill me now, I beg you please,
kill me before I turn into that monster begging on it's knees.



Oh, is that a mirror?
Just some depressing thoughts.
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:icongeorge551:
George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Very well written..you should be proud of this, final line is definately something I will remember.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Thank you very much, I really enjoyed writing it.
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
:D dm
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TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Amazingly written poem, as always Violet. I do have to say that that this one touched the heart strings... We do love you, you know. *Glomps*
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I know. :icondragonhugplz:
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:icontheamericanrealist:
TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe like it or not, you are stuck with us! (Me especially)^^
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Indeed, so I might as well like it.
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:icontheamericanrealist:
TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
Exactly!
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queenlilly18 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist
We all love you. Everyone from our lunch table. <3 <3
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I know. Here is just a tip, all of my poetry will be depressing, but I will never commit suicide, so you need not worry.
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queenlilly18 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist
Okay. Me neither the thought of suicide scares me allot.
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Indeed.
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:icondasunicorm:
DasUnicorm Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconsupertackleplz: WE ALL LUVZ YOU SHADOW!!!:iconsupertighthugplz:
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
In know. Also, I love your new icon.
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DasUnicorm Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Writer
:tighthug: You are not allowed to leave. You are not expired. You are not lazy. You are an amazing, talented and caring person. :huggle:
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Thank you. :huggle:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Aww...always my dear friend. If something ever happened to you it would hurt my heart so very badly and the skins would open up because it would feel the pain in my heart and mix with the tears that would run from my eyes. :huggle:
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
That is awfully poetic of you. ^-^
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
They were words that came from my heart when I read what you wrote. :huggle:
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
:icondragonglomp:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
:( while this is beautifully written, please know that I love you just as you are. Friend-love, maybe, but it's still love. So please, don't leave us. I'd be absolutely heartbroken. :(
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Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Don't worry, I will not leave life. The pains of life are nothing to the pain my friends would have with my death. I will not be so selfish. ^-^
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I wasn't accusing you of selfish thoughts but I am glad to hear that nonetheless. :tighthug: we lauffles you Crystal!!!!
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:icondragon-demygod:
Dragon-Demygod Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I did not think that you where accusing anything, I'm sorry if you though I did.
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:iconsutsuki-sensei:
Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Not at all lol. Just wanted to make sure you didn't think I was. ^-^
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